2011年成考高起点《英语》作文范文(4)

　　4、假设你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了你所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江成的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括以下表中的内容。

　　自然情况①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住

　　成就②经济发展迅速 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等

　　存在问题④水、空气污染 ⑤交通拥挤

　　对江城发展的看法⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)

　　注意：

　　1、回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

　　2、词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计人词数。

　　参考词汇：经济economy

　　Dear Bob,

　　It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city,Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

　　Yours,

　　Xiaohua

　　「参考答案」

　　Dear Bob,

　　It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

　　The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories,houses,and roads have been built .More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However,there are still some problems,such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion,Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a letter hometown in future.

　　Yours,

　　Xiaohua

　　「解析」短文需包括下列要点：

　　(1)江城位于长江边，风景优美，适合居住;

　　(2)经济发展迅速;

　　(3)新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等;

　　(4)存在的问题;水、空气污染，交通拥挤;

　　(5)江城应进一步发展经济，保护环境。